Wow. You have a real gift for poetry.

I like this poem, it is very spiritual and overcoming. However i felt that it needed a soft ending, perhaps another line...

Watching... Knowing...

Great poem. It makes the narrator seem either a pillar of support or something that is every memory or moment mixed in one. I still haven't decided yet. It's like every emotion that bundles within us at any time.

Good stuff :)