Nicely written.



Psalm 56:8-9
You number my wanderings;
Put my tears into Your bottle;
Are they not in Your book?
When I cry out to You,
Then my enemies will turn back;
This I know, because God is for me.

I like it and understand it. I too am a christain. But I hate my imperfections. And I am glad that God loves me as I am. I don't know what I'd do without him. Nice poem. Message well conveyed. Simple but intricate (the theme I mean). Loved it. Good work. =]

good poem! You don't have to be Christian to love God and to identify with the feeling of sliding away and find myself coming back. Your poem describe my reliance on God to guide me really well.
Good Job! :D
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Very good poem. Rings true for very many. R&R my stuff too.

I love God. I know, that sounds really weird but I just had to say that. This was a wonderful poem expressing how we can't save ourselves. We can try and go through life without Him, but it is only harder. Beautiful poem!