Huh... you know, now that I think about it, how does Marin know what color eyes she has? If she can't remember anything, and she's blind, how would she know her eyes are "dull unblinking gray" or however you said it? I'm going to assume you did that on purpose ... Marin just gets more and more mysterious!

Ugh, you haven't updated in forever so I can assume you won't any time soon... But, please? The suspense is killing me. I must have more!

Well, that answers my question about the Namer... sort of. I'm still curious about him/her.

Poor Marin. Sounds like something's really tormenting her. What is it?

Holy crap! Plot twist? This gets better and better; I love Marin more with every chapter!

Whoa! Who is the Namer? Is he the person that rules the Guardians? Is he God?

And I kinda expected Adin to be in love with Ulja.. I mean, seriously. :P But, he handled it kind of immaturely. I think it was a petty, desperate kind of "in love". He's falling for Marin, I think; and it'll be a much more mature love, the kind that a man, not a boy, has for a woman! :D

No! Ulja can't leave! She was so sweet and good... poor Adin... speaking of which, I think he likes Marin. But doesn't know it yet. :]

Oh, what's going to happen next?? So suspensful! Cool names, Byouu and Xinabi and stuff, for the towns.

Wow! Marin is just full of surprises. I must say you've got me hooked...

Even though he's a real **, I like Adin. His mom sounds like a loser.

Not all blind people have gray eyes. I like how you gave Maren gray eyes though. She seems intriguing.

Good beginning. I like Ulja.

Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

~Carm~

Great job at painting a picture. Nice twist at the end. Nice work.

Have a fantastic day and an amazing summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Absolutely wonderful. I love every bit of this story :)

Keep up the fantastic work!

~Carm~

It's a great chapter!

I just realized something though, that you tend to write in an informal manner... there's a word for that, but I can't recall x_x Well usually, when you write a story, that's best to be avoided. Just pointing it out~ ^^

Sixth

Interesting. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~