Reviews for Mine Robot - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: Mine Robot

Nolan Robertson 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI thought this story was very well written and provocative. You obviously have a strong interest in this kind of genre/plot. I think you should keep up with this sort of theme. I like to read creative interpretations of the future like this: man-machine interaction, technology, etc. Very cool. Keep it up!
GilanSalehi 2007-08-22 ch 4,	abuseVery good. I quick read, but very enjoyable. You write well, and the characters were developed pretty well for such a short story. Do you have anything else in the works that you are thinking of posting? I'd be interesting in reading that, too. Keep writing!
GilanSalehi 2007-08-22 ch 3,	abuseAsimov is getting some real play here. I think you should list the three Laws at the beginning of the first chapter so that readers who aren't familiar with Asimov can follow the plot a little better. I know them, but not everyone does. This was a good chapter, and the puzzle pieces are beginning to fall into place. I don't understand what Samantha realizes at the end, but I guess that'll be answered in the next chapter. The odd reactions of the robots are throwing me off a little, but hopefully there'll be a good reason why they're acting so strangely.
GilanSalehi 2007-08-22 ch 2,	abuseDun dun dun! It sounds like LN8 has been tampered with... But by whom? The plot thickens... No grammar or spelling mistakes to note, you have done a good job in that department. You do a good job with the dialogue as well, I think it's one of your strong suits. You make the robot sound a lot more human than a hunk of metal through the way it speaks, sometimes. Or perhaps it is just a human flaw that we all find the familiar in the alien (or robotic). Good job on this one, I'm on to the next chapter.
GilanSalehi 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseInteresting premise. You do a good job characterizing how humans feel around robots: technically safe, but unsettled at a deep level. It's almost the way kids are scared of the dark: they know there's really nothing there, but can't shake the nagging feeling that something bad is. I like it so far. I'm on to the next chapter...
K. R. Ukido 2007-07-31 ch 4,	abuseIt's over? Not fair!! Well, it was definitely good. I liked it a lot, and I'll probably read it again. You sent a good message and really depicted robots as being... beings too. Your explaination was flawless and left for no plot holes, a feat in itself; you ALSO kept it interesting, something my explainations never are. Altogether a good read. Keep Writing! ~K. R. Ukido
K. R. Ukido 2007-07-31 ch 3,	abuseWhat? What makes sense?? I'm clueless :). I actually haven't found anything to complain about since Chapter One... which is incredible for me since I LOVE to complain. Good chapter! Keep writing! ~K. R. Ukido
K. R. Ukido 2007-07-31 ch 2,	abuseLN-8 is screwed up! I wonder who's doing that to him...? Once again you've made me want to read more. I love the mystery so far, and the fact that you made the future believeable astounds me. That's hard to do. Great job! Keep writing! ~K. R. Ukido
K. R. Ukido 2007-07-31 ch 1,	abuse...I'm impressed. You've really caught my attention here--this was the perfect first chapter of what I'm sure will be a good story. I noticed a few little nitpicky mistakes, but all in all the chapter was well-detialed, thought-oiut, consise, and a good read. Keep writing! ~K. R Ukido
BlackCat939 2007-05-24 ch 4,	abuseWonderful! I don't really like Sci-fi, but you have changed my mind completely! Keep writing; you're very good at it.

Return to Top