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| Captain Lucky 2008-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the way you wrote this. It really does have emotion and it flows much better than most poetry I've read, so good job! =) CL |
| Ramenluver 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseAh! Like this one much better! *smiley face* It's that beautiful imagery. I can tell you put thought into it. It doesn't really matter to me what you review. Choose something to your liking. :) Another fav. Well done! |
| Limegreen elephant 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusei really liked it :D and i love reviewing! so there is no paying back to be done!! plus i have absolutley nothing up, (stupid 3 day limit, lol.) anyway, the poem made sense to me, and it rocks! |
| Saoirse O'Suilleabhain 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI really, really like this! Especially the word-play in "roar-rumble drums the thunder", the whole sentence SOUNDS like thunder. |
| daisy dreams. 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusegod! this is amazing, seriously my favorite one out of all of your poems! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWow... I can't fully describe this... It's different from the rest. ^^ Great job! |
| Anjel Kitty 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI like it, but am trying to figure it out. Great this is going to be stuck in my head for awhile, but I don't care cause I like it. |
| Alexandria Smith 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI love the transitions between the lines. You really are a good writer. I really liked this piece. |
| A Sweet Escape 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThat is by far one of your best poems!! |
| EAPreader 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abusewow, I'm impressed. I love how you represent the torn feelings with a storm. Really powerful for something so simple. |