I really like the way you wrote this. It really does have emotion and it flows much better than most poetry I've read, so good job!

=)
CL

Ah! Like this one much better! *smiley face* It's that beautiful imagery. I can tell you put thought into it. It doesn't really matter to me what you review. Choose something to your liking. :)
Another fav. Well done!

i really liked it :D
and i love reviewing! so there is no paying back to be done!! plus i have absolutley nothing up, (stupid 3 day limit, lol.)
anyway, the poem made sense to me, and it rocks!

I really, really like this! Especially the word-play in "roar-rumble drums the thunder", the whole sentence SOUNDS like thunder.

god! this is amazing, seriously my favorite one out of all of your poems!

Wow...

I can't fully describe this...

It's different from the rest.

^^

Great job!

I like it, but am trying to figure it out. Great this is going to be stuck in my head for awhile, but I don't care cause I like it.

I love the transitions between the lines. You really are a good writer. I really liked this piece.

That is by far one of your best poems!!

wow, I'm impressed. I love how you represent the torn feelings with a storm. Really powerful for something so simple.