Well. I read this poem three times before hitting the review button - though that's not a bad thing.

In this poem, I would have to say that you have some very powerful lines - or at least, they strike me just right. For example, I absolutely love the end. Nicely worded and well done :)

I mean, I could tell you some aspects of the poem that didn't strike me as powerfully, but I have no suggestions for them, so, if you want me to go more detailed into that sort of stuff, feel free to drop me a line. If not, don't worry about it - it's merely one reader's opinnion after all - and I'm not such a high-ranking critic anyways :D.

Overal; there are some very unique and strong sections of this poem and it wasn't a bad read.

-Dee

I really enjoyed reading this one, and found it very emotional. I'll add u to my favorite authors list, good job :) And post some new poems up soon! I'll R&R

The title drew me in, and the poem kept me captivated. I really liked this one--nice work!