Reviews for Bathroom Graffiti

Khali Draegan 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abusea-**-men
Rachizzle 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseo_O Vomit.. HM... .. ... MGMKHKLAJDKLA! >_> lol Good poem, I liked it.
xDancingintheRainx 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseWow. I really like this piece. Everything is worded so well and the imagery is really clear. I can see the scenes and the graffiti on the walls. Such a sad piece, but you worded it so gracefully. My only suggestion is this: When you said: "Unheard cries of help still spiral across tiles and closed doors. Pleads for love and help" instead of saying "help" twice, I'd suggest using it only once and putting a different word in there. Other than that, I think you did an excellent job!
killer syntax 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseWow, what a creative edge to an otherwise undesireable subject. Very enjoyable, and very interesting. Nice job!