 Marbur 2007-05-14 . chapter 1Let them think they're winning until you turn it around and wipe the floor with their **. Interesting personality quirk, (okay, I've nothing to finish that sentence with, so I'll end this review here) |
 TrippinOnAcid 2007-05-13 . chapter 1Good, well put. |
 Samurai Poet 2007-05-10 . chapter 1YES! Attitude, I like this one. It gives off the feeling that you are an individual that refuses to be taken advantage of, I truly respect that. So to quote a phrase of the fellow stereotypical black person "Go on girl"!!(lol) That's right, speak your mind and relieve that stress. |
 DeathMetal18 2007-05-08 . chapter 1tee hee ^ ^ revenge is fun ;). This was really hateful...it was ** awsome! I loved tyhe fact that it is short because that gives it an even stronger effect! Great Job
-Twilight Wolf
By The By; FaLL oUT bOY sUCKS, NUFF SAID. mUDVAYNE IS BETTER. |
 The Cowardly Lion 2007-05-07 . chapter 1Love it! |
 flies.like.decay. 2007-05-07 . chapter 1Dude, your profile is long. I'd read it, or atleast some of it, but I'm at the library and I got school work to do. My loser parents didn't pay their internet bill, ha ha. But wait.. you're taking me down? Ha ha. Reminds me of that one song by Korn. *Hides Josh Groban cd* Yeah...Well...School work... if the site starts working. |
 Guardrail 2007-05-05 . chapter 1Beautifully written. I love the strong voice you use here and the independant message of the poem. This is so well done, great work. Thanks so much for the review and keep writing. |
 Tytherpol 2007-05-05 . chapter 1Pretty simple, but powerful in its straightforwardness.
I like it. |