I really like this. It was great. )

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I like this.. the title is great with the ending... and i love hte part about vaporizing.. awesome piece

the desperation and stark beauty of this kill me.

this is one of my favorites of yours. its the best thing i have read in a while. im listening to the song right now, and its beautiful. i love the diction and imagery here. gorgeous.

You describe you many so many different things in such a vivid way. I can even begin to say how much I love this. It's complex and yet the emotions shine through simply. Take care.

Wow. I love this. My favorite lines: "and i’d like to hear the gasp of oxygen

that rushes blindly from your lungs before

you say my name.

say it loudly, say it proudly."

Keep writing.

The imagery in this was just... mind-blowing. Great job!

Stunning, and I mean it. Congrats for being one of the actual poets on the site! You have a real talent for wordplay.

Always write on!