i feel so sorry for anna. *sob*

Aww. Poor Anna, I can only imagine how it would feel to go through that.

But this was written fantastically! ^.^

that's sad. really sux for Anna. or you. not sure. i liked the end, it was really deep. how long can you live a lie before believing it yourself?

nice nice nice. but i have to ask, what's with the names? they could be made up but you put anna, and it makes me feel like you're talking about me. which i know you're not, but it's weird. but it's very good. i'm really liking these. are you going to continue with anna and daniel?

Very nice. I feel that last part sometimes... that i'm tired of pretending.

The last line was perfect, it really wrapped everything up. Your word choice was really good and I loved the imagery.

I wish I could give a better review, because most of my reviews are quite lenghty with constructive criticism, but wow... this was just so good. The emotion and everything!

I'm just rambling now. Gah. But seriously, good job. :D

been there done that... Good job you did I think, I liked it and could relate to it. Keep writing, its really good!