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| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseThere's something nice about this. A little chilling, perhaps, but it's a sweet, happy ending. It's a pleasant read. The breaks and pauses made it a bit confusing at times, but all in all it's very good. |
| Gypsy Pink 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseSad. But quite good. |