yEah.. A poet's pain cannot be taken that easily.. you've interpreted it very rythmically.. very nice.. :)

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this is quite good. i like the rhymes and the ladt couplet is really effective, but just a technical point, this isnt a sonnet. its a good poem though and i think the subject is one which many can relate to.

Wow . . . passionate, dramatic, worthy to be called a poem! Thumbs up!

I loved it! Your rhyming made it so deep and reflective! The words you used to express yourself made it so easy to unerstand and relate to! Also, you managed to make the poem quiet long, without repeating yourself or make it drabbleish! This goes in my favorites!
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