Haha, this is cute. I like how you associate lateness with how you look. Very cute. Keep writing! :)

Is that a good feeling or a bad one?

~SirScott

Concise and wonderful. Glad to see more of these define: haiku (senryu)!

Wolfie

ahah, i like this one :) peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. :)

it's amazing how you can make a haiku so descriptive

I always say that beauty is skin deep, but ugly is to the bone.

~SirScott

Yipe! Graphic. Powerful in that way, though. This one is a strong haik--senryu. ^^

Wolfie

Nothing to do with your heart. More of a pants-area thing.

Spelt bulge wrong

crack?

Excellent spew about dimension 4.

Yay Baxter. The time bender.

Alan/gelina

peanut and jelly is a classic lunch. I hope you remember to eat your apple.

~SirScott

Criticism makes us grow. Well, at least, that's what my old man says.

~SirScott

I have not read them all, but I think it's a nice little collection of peculiar and beautiful haiku's. I most enjoyed the Water-trilogy. Truly wonderful work and I commend you.

And of course thank you for the constant reviews!

Aww, sad, do you not like slam poetry? Because I love it. It's one of my favorite forms of poetry. Completely free verse and completely stream-of-consciousness. But to each their own. I like the little tweak you did here. Nice. Keep writing! :)