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   WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 7Yech. Sounds a little bit like me right now-just got back from a 6 and a half hour combination of 18 holes of golf and heavy yard work. _ Wolfie |
| WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 6 I like the title of the first of this little trilogy, and the entirety of the last haiku. Has a...yep! Good finish. Wolfie |
| WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 5 I think cliches are more effective when introduce in poetry. Yeah. Wolfie |
| WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 4 Mm. This one is good...impacting, I think, is a good word for this. Wolfie |
| WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 3 This one got a smirk out of me. You have nice finishes for these. Wolfie |
| WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 2 Ha! Fantastic finisher on this one, love! Wolfie |
| WyrdWolf 5/6/07 . chapter 1 I very much love this whole idea. And you're lucky, getting to take CW before junior year. Where I'm stuck doing yard work... Wolfie |
| no.peace.los.angeles 5/6/07 . chapter 1 Mmhmm, I so know that feeling. Creative writing class was always the class that went by the fastest for me, too. And because I like to be nitpicky: I would attempt a stronger verb or set of verbs for this, simply because it is so short. You need to choose the most impactful words in a poem this length. But I so know the feeling. Keep writing! :) |
