|Reviews for RIP|
| non.graceful 5/9/11 . chapter 1
It's all in the mind. Whatever you let out will be used against you. It'll be twisted and turned, muddled and blurred- unseen to the eyes.
Nice poem poet :)
| Ashelin 5/6/07 . chapter 1
Good, you should never let anyone tear away your dreams from you. I loved the images you created in this one. Wonderful job.
| a silenced revolution 5/6/07 . chapter 1
Great idea for a poem. I liked the way you ended it. Great job.