|Reviews for Take Me|
| JoJo619 1/4/09 . chapter 1
Wow! That was really good. Haunting.
| Ecomsay 11/12/07 . chapter 1
i love it i can total relate
| gnomesbeatfaeries 9/25/07 . chapter 1
Error wise all you I's are lower case and your I'll's look like ill's, but poem wise I really liked it. At first, the repetition got in the way and threw me off, but as I read more, it worked. Maybe i'm being brainwashed...
| tesa131313 6/19/07 . chapter 1
1. where you had a -
you could have put a comma
2. If this was a techno song...
| bR0k3N 5/6/07 . chapter 1
I won't point out any errors! I liked this. you're right, I couldn't quite catch the flow but it still was good! i still liked the words!
| braindead1345 5/6/07 . chapter 1
its pretty good. and i think of it as having a rok-pop-ish kinda