| Reviews for Lost |
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lael1bologna 12/28/08 . chapter 1I loved it! write on! :) |
notated descant 5/8/07 . chapter 1hmm, I feel like critiquing a bit, if you don't mind. I think this is a very good base for a poem, but your next steps might be experimenting with different words. Poetry is basically wordplay and experimentation, and sneaking in as much sub-text as you can (or is needed) into a stanza, or whatever the case it. Try metaphors, and expand your vocabulary. It's a good start though ) |