I like the simpleness to it, and the nice flow. Is the hidden meaning, that life goes on but it's stil beutiful, or something like that.

Keep Writing!

Double AA

this had a great flow to it, and i rather enjoyed it. can you please indulge me to this 'hidden meaning'?

Hey, is this something like...about hope, or waiting for the good times to come eventually? It reminds me of mine, which sounds strange, but yeah...

I'm fine. Nice poem :D

This wonderful, and I am going to add it to my C2!

*TSP

I liked this, though not quite as much as the other piece of yours I read. My only suggestion is maybe instead of saying "sky" or "dawn" so much that you might want to use a different word to make the poem come to life a little bit more. Overall, I think you did a really nice job. Thanks so much for the reviews, by the way. I really appreciate them!