Reviews for the truth about wendy

Free Lernihan 2007-05-15 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting and different, keep it up, I like it a lot.
rightersbloke 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abusedefinitely continue on this story. i like the parody of peter pan. fantastic opening. i didn't notice any tense mess-ups. keep it up!
Nirnaeth Arnoediad 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. One thing, though; the second sentence, while technically correct, sounds kind of weird: She can hear birds twittering just outside her window and thinks about getting out of bed to shut the window and go back to bed. I think it's the repetition of bed. This is just my opinion, but changing it to sleep or something else might make it sound more natural. Anyway, this was a really nice piece; great job.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseHa yes I havn't been on this site in AGES Anywho, I love your writings, ** Amaazing how you can take something so classic and turn into such a gritty, nailbiting story Love x
14-10-2004 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseNot too bad... Its worth a shot, eh?
LiveToTheFullest 2007-05-06 ch 1,	abuseI like the one shot idea because the openness of the ending adds to the story. It makes the reader think. You could, however, always write more and see what you think. That's what I always do. good luck!