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| sunscraped. 2007-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseI'm sick of the word sick. This is an example of overused repitition. Tone it down a bit and rework it without the word sick popping up everywhere. And you might want to take mental sickness out of your summary, because that implies a disorder like schizophrenia, not feeling fed up. |