The last line kills me. I love the idea of the poem-- the moon in pain whenever a kite falls. And the desire to have someone care if you fell too. It's beautiful.

By the way, thanks for the review. It meant a lot to me, especially for that poem.

A very interesting poem. I loved the ending. Great job.

The comparison is something I'd have never come up with. It's pretty original, and that's very pleasing to see.