That's a different thought to murder something that isn't alive. Good job.

SirScott

Lovely poem as always. (I really need to find something else to say about your writting one of these days...)

Rowan.

Mm, nice job. The reader knows what you're talking about yet you still write with secrecy, which is very nice. My favourite line is "Gravestone that reads a lot like poetry slipping off my tounge" ...I think you meant "off" and not "of" anyway, great job.