Who's this "great artist" friend of yours? :B
FREAKIN' AWESOME CHAPTER. This story's moving up on my favorites list~

i love your update..its a great story line..with you using mythology as the characters its quite a fantasy actually..

is that it? ah ..please write more..its an interesting story!!..hope you do more..!!

Kawaii!
This is so cute. I really like your ideas, using mythology like this.
It had amazing potential.

Cittywolf

New story!! I saw that you asked for reviews on The Rising Sun and yes, I do have a favorite but I like your new stroies as well. And YAY!! MYTHOLOGY!! My favorite list goes: Greek, Roman, and then Norse. TOP THREE!! Though I can't remember if the Moon ever fell out of orbit in Norse mthology, TO THE BOOKS! But first, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! And try to update The Rising Sun too because I'm too lazy to review and it will probably be awhile until I get around to it.

I like the Moon-Wolf...he's really funny to me, somehow...XD This was so awesome! Much different from your usual stuff.

...NOW IT NEEDS SMEX. >:D