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Reviews For: Phosphorescence

Dawn Gabriel 2007-08-03 ch 1,	abuseChilling. I liked it. ~Thursday
Join The Darkside... 2007-06-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseIf you ever went to the ghetto, you wouldn't make it out alive. I mean, here, in Gay Pride Land, black people call white people crackers in an offensive term. So, if you made the mistake of calling a black person a cracker because they were 'funny ', they'd pull their .45 out of their drawers and cop you off. But don't worry, I'd visit your funeral and leave a box of crackers for you. You visited my myspace? Now, that is funny seeing as I have all those hick pictures off. But it's weird, cause random people add me because of the pic and are like, 'Do you really look like that?'. The world is full of idiots I tell ya. Seven more days until what? The 4th of July? Or, I don't think you guys'd celebrate that. Hmm, maybe you do, but who knows. Yeah, I don't like the Rossi Beau idea. Everything I try to plan something, it fall flat and then when I don't plan, it's like WHAM! For the contest, maybe we should just write a cliche story, only that's way hard for me because I look at what I write and cringe, then my fingers unexpectedly press CTRL-A and then the DELETE key. lol. We should do a cliche story together. Like it'd ever get done, but when we were bored and having anger issues at FP, we could write on it then. But I need to start on Rowan, I might do that this afternoon, but you're going to have to tweak the encounter because you are the one that made it so difficult. An old FP account? Heart.of.stone. Gosh, emo much? I always feel like writing cliche, and I might just do that one of these days. Maybe I'll do the whole professional athlete thingy because they're hot. Hmm. It'd have to be rugby though because I got to see the whole UNL team shirtless, so definitely rugby. Anyway, I have work, so I'll write more later seeing as I only work 2 hours. I'll try to get started on Rowan and Kian, although I can't promise you that none of it will be in Sonny's POV. He's too damn awesome. Maybe I'll have him reflecting on how he jacked the coins from Kian while he's watering his garden.
someone almost died today..... 2007-06-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseYeah, someone could have, but they just threw their back out on the slide, so we had to backboard them out. it was creepy. That, and spending my other break eating is my excuse for getting a whole 1 chapter planned out for Rossi, but ideas are formulating. How's Tatum and Zebulon going? He light anything else on fire lately? I'm out of words, and you should get on, but if you don't, i'll send you my complete plan for Rossi by my monday, which is a tuesday for you.
They call me Tamara 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseI love it. I am normally a critical reviwer, but this little piece of perfection stopped my heart and made me think. Thankyou for a wonderful read.
uumm bopppp. i hate that so... 2007-05-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseWTF U FREAK! U BLEW HER UP?!?!?!?!? FREAKING FREAK. FREAKS LIKE U SHULD BE BLOWN UP. HAHAHAHAHAHGAGHAHA U ALSO NED TO LERN HOW TO SPEEL U FREAK. I GOT A MUMMY TOO! YEAH, IT'S WRAPPED IN TARS AND LINEN. Anyway, I was expecting the bushwhacker story. What happened to the bushwhackers? Was this about some random bombing, or more like the Hiroshima/Nagasaki one because you're a weirdo seudo-japanaese wannabe. What Illyland was the little girl refering to? I think you tried to make up your own island. You should have used firecrackers to blow her up. You should be rejoicing right now. I almost got eaten by rabid goats. Jones tried to bite my fingers off. I have bite marks. Hahah!! My friend said there was no way my goat was pregnant, but she had a baby!! Haha. Yay. I named him Copernicus, and the little baby that was born on friday, I named him Little Napoleon. Gosh man, I'm too young to be a grandma. I don't have any real kids. I think I skipped a step. We should write my crazy holding up the 7-11 together because I'm too lazy to write it on my own. I need to go, I have evil work ahead. See ya.

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