konnichi wa

LoL! I know, I know - I really shouldn't be laughing because of how depressing it is... but it's kind of funny, too, if you stop for a second to contemplate how ridiculous it is. I love your tone here - sarcasm. :) "I suppose I should stay away from the tub, then." "and I guess the pills are off limits..." And the imagery at the end: "dinner would just be ruined." I loved it!

Zaijen

-Shan-

hehe, you're so brilliant :)

this is great.

i could never kill myself

because

it would hurt my parents.

female poets are simply emotional, and they think.

too much, maybe. if it's possible to think too much.

This is perfect. Your last three lines are especially wonderful.

When I was reading the rules for posting stories/poem today, it said that you should use all caps, because it shows a disrespect for the English language and blah blah blah...

I thought it was amusing. I like this though. It's shorter than some of your recent stuff, but still good. No sticking heads in ovens! Unless the person really deserves it :P

And I know I'm just rambling now, but I do that a lot, so I'm sure you're used to it. A lot of female poets have commited suicide... I guess all the angsty stuff we write can just push us past our limit...