yes i liked it very much!! it made me smile:) see

Very nice. I wish that there was actual music that would go with this. I think that the words are very catchy and poppish. I really like it and hope that you continue to write lyrics for songs. If you had a song in mind, tell me for reference.

Lady Alera Van Hexis
HP

ah, don't like the references to beer. it's nice and sweet before that, though...

why do you write a song about how materialism is bad but then tell me you are materialistic? An author should believe in what they write... You give good advice, but should take some of it with you. very inventive and the lyrics are original...

i ♥ the line "I just wish the girl for you is me." awesome! like this one alittle bit more than 'prom'

are these to any particular tune?

#2-pretty & relatable

My face lines are "Don't you know there's a see ya in easy?" & "with a hike of the skirt and some hair twirl?" Very awesome =]

this is so cute! =]