Oh wow. I actually thought he killed her!

What a twist! ^.^

that's such a weird dream. but i can relate, sort of. there is a guy who i would do almost anything for. almost. tho he doesn't know that. good story, even if it was sad. sad stories are the best stories.

What the hell? Ha ha!.. This story is so odd, yet, intriguing all the same. This story gave me goose bumps, and confused me at the same time. Her nightmare was so real, and yet it could happen. Great job!

bwahahahahaha! it's nice. i have major writers block now, but whatever. it's really really good. YAY! progession!