This piece is beautifully written, with expert word choice, rhythm and description. While it is a short story, it conveys far more meaning than ones I've seen thrice the length. Thank you for putting something this wonderful and meaningful on Fictionpress.

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Sweet and sad at the same time. Great job. ^^

i almost forget my password ^^;
i totally loved this with all
mah heart it made me want to cry

SOMETHING SHORT FROM YOU.
g a s p.
that was a good quick read
and i liked it. this couple
/almost/ is cute and tragic.
and earn itself a favorite.