I'm almost positive it doesn't taste bitter, but I love the three pricks idea.

you spelled or's last name wrong. he wrote part of it? o. well anyway... none of it is yours so i have no idea what i supposed to review. um... i'll look at the next chapter.

um... pedophile? just guessing. I'm enjoying guessing what all these strange poem/story type things are about. can you tell? i like how desperate he sounds. btw, I'm not just complementing you on all these chapters for the sake of complementing them. mostly i just don't get them, so i say what i like about them because if i don't get them then there is nothing i can say that is bad. that was the absolute worst constructed sentence I've ever heard. i can't think right today. i'll add you to my alerts thingy.

ok, i have no idea who this chapter is about at all. is it a real person, or like, some twisted person directly from your brain? i'm all curious. has god, like, visited you? omg! its cool descriptions and stuff. aren't i articulate? yay me. anyway, bye.

same person as usual, right? well, cool stuffs. good job.

That was reaally deep. Soo kool. OMG that was awesome. Like FREAKING AWESOME. Yeah. Totally. Yeah.

You FREAKING ROCK!

...I didn't just do that. Nope. Not me. Of course not. Definitely NOT.

So. I'm cool. Totally cool. But seriously man. THAT ** FLIPPED MY BOAT!

...I mean, um... *Cough* *Cough* *Clears throat* Nice story man... Um, yeah. It was like, pretty... pretty smooth. *Clears throat again* Yeah. Totally. I'm cool. I'm cool.


~Random Person Passing By-- "...?"

that's totally ** awesome! Such a cool compilation of liturature. Totally keep adding stuff, and sending it to me. Totally ** awesome. Totally ** awesome.