|Reviews for i can't take it|
| ce n'est pas que je m'appelle 9/28/07 . chapter 1
Did you ever end up telling her?
Would it be too crazy of me to say that I think you'd be one to
have the talent to be able to write one kick ass novel-in-verse?
Your poetry just tells its story so effortlessly,
I couldn't help but suggest the idea.
| Lost In Context 5/26/07 . chapter 1
sad, but impactful. The "nothing./ just complaining about dinner" lines break my heart. The forty days bit is confusing- what happens in forty more days? Overall though, it's heartbreaking but very good.
| randompoetry 5/22/07 . chapter 1
Wow, how sad. I like the emphesizing of forty days, forty days. It makes it urgent and worried, all mixed together. Powerful message, it ends sadly but I like to hope there is a happy ending afterwards...
| kshields 5/11/07 . chapter 1
I LOVE this poem/story! I am bi and I haven't told anyone but my friends so this really says a lot...
| in a jar pk 5/8/07 . chapter 1
i got your email before i read this and i'm like, 'oh.'
i love this, though. xx
| wizard-mind-bomb 5/7/07 . chapter 1
If this is a song well...I'm going to be blunt. I out right stinks. If this is a story well it has no potential. Here is some help if this is a story. Slowly describe the main character as you progress the first chapter