 Taisi 2009-03-29 . chapter 2xD Cute! I love Nate's reaction to the break-in. Pure genius. |
 blackoblivion13 2008-06-11 . chapter 2THat was funny, and very interesting. I wanna know why Alex wanted to b&e Nate's house though. |
 Nancy 2007-07-06 . chapter 2 Hey you should update this. Its interesting and I'd love to read more! |
 Amerez 2007-05-22 . chapter 2yay, update! I love this story, it's so absurd and cute. "Creepy kid" he he.
Just one thing, the POV was a bit confusing...other than that it was great! |
 otter pop 2007-05-21 . chapter 2So... I really suck at reviews and pretty much all I can tell you is i really like this story and it makes me smile. =D Yup. That's pretty much it. |
 Esquirella 2007-05-21 . chapter 2Poor Nate! Can't get any respect! |
 Kailum 2007-05-21 . chapter 2Rofl I loved your last line. Pure GOLD. XD
I still wonder why Nate was all awkward when Alex mentioned his excuse about being a friend from school? |
 Esquirella 2007-05-09 . chapter 1A very cool start! Nate's awesome! |
 Kailum 2007-05-08 . chapter 1Wow this is a great start. Everything's so FUNNY and light-hearted. I love it! Man imagine that... inviting a thief into your house to eat dinner XD Freaking hilarious. I want to read more! |
 otter pop 2007-05-07 . chapter 1Haha. Nate sure is odd, but I like it. I'm likin' where this is goin' so you be updating soon! |
 Amerez 2007-05-07 . chapter 1Hey, I like your story so far!
Dialog is great, but I wish you'd added some descriptions. Anyway, you said you would next time so I await eagerly.
By the way, congrats on your lack of typos, or at least I didn't see any... |
 skepticwriter 2007-05-07 . chapter 1This one is really good. I like the way you write. Simple and light. I am looking forward to the next update |
 randomness 2007-05-07 . chapter 1 that was really good! a really awesome start. i definitely want to know more about both characters. nate's so cute!! ok, so update soon. seriously. i hate really good stories that start with one chapter, maybe two, just to dwindle off into oblivion. more! |