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Reviews For: Butterflies and Hurricanes
Taisi 2009-03-29 . chapter 2
xD Cute! I love Nate's reaction to the break-in. Pure genius.
blackoblivion13 2008-06-11 . chapter 2
THat was funny, and very interesting. I wanna know why Alex wanted to b&e Nate's house though.
Nancy 2007-07-06 . chapter 2
Hey you should update this. Its interesting and I'd love to read more!
Amerez 2007-05-22 . chapter 2
yay, update! I love this story, it's so absurd and cute. "Creepy kid" he he.

Just one thing, the POV was a bit confusing...other than that it was great!
otter pop 2007-05-21 . chapter 2
So... I really suck at reviews and pretty much all I can tell you is i really like this story and it makes me smile. =D Yup. That's pretty much it.
Esquirella 2007-05-21 . chapter 2
Poor Nate! Can't get any respect!
Kailum 2007-05-21 . chapter 2
Rofl I loved your last line. Pure GOLD. XD

I still wonder why Nate was all awkward when Alex mentioned his excuse about being a friend from school?
Esquirella 2007-05-09 . chapter 1
A very cool start! Nate's awesome!
Kailum 2007-05-08 . chapter 1
Wow this is a great start. Everything's so FUNNY and light-hearted. I love it! Man imagine that... inviting a thief into your house to eat dinner XD Freaking hilarious. I want to read more!
otter pop 2007-05-07 . chapter 1
Haha. Nate sure is odd, but I like it. I'm likin' where this is goin' so you be updating soon!
Amerez 2007-05-07 . chapter 1
Hey, I like your story so far!

Dialog is great, but I wish you'd added some descriptions. Anyway, you said you would next time so I await eagerly.

By the way, congrats on your lack of typos, or at least I didn't see any...
skepticwriter 2007-05-07 . chapter 1
This one is really good. I like the way you write. Simple and light. I am looking forward to the next update
randomness 2007-05-07 . chapter 1
that was really good! a really awesome start. i definitely want to know more about both characters. nate's so cute!! ok, so update soon. seriously. i hate really good stories that start with one chapter, maybe two, just to dwindle off into oblivion. more!
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