“Buddha, you’re conspiring with God and Allah to make my life miserable aren’t you?” Classic, love the way your mind works.

This has potential, a gigantic, humongous, ginormous potential...

Christ but this is hilarious. :L

...morning is shaping out to be. = morning was shaping out to be.

Write some more whenever you can...and I'm sorry about your grandpa. God bless.

Another great update!
I would have suspected a little less quality, since you've been distracted by obvious reasons...it's not the case though.
You're really talented! Good luck with your grandfather...I know what it's like!
Can't wait to see what will happen next in the story...

I love this story!
You're a fantatic writer.
Keep up the good work.
I can't wait until you update.

hope you're grandad gets better!
well, i like your writing style, but i hope she doesnt actually end up LIKING Benjamin T_T
but still, i am intrigued!!

Good update!!

i am so glad you updated :D

Hanah your stories are effin RAD!
Can't wait until the next update!
Keep up the great work!
Im sorry about your grandpa ):

amazingness! can't wait for the next one!

Sorry to hear about your Grandfather.
But this is good update. i cant wait to see what happens next. . . *high pitched giggle*

Remember me? Sorry I was so harsh when I reviewed your last chapter. I'm not usually that mean, I really don't know I was so mean that day. But my basic points aren't much different. I still don't like your main character because she doesn't seem to dislike the guy she "supposedly" hates enough. In real life, I think a girl who hates some guy that much wouldn't let him throw her into his car, nor would she stay in it shrieking, unless the guy was armed and with weapons. And especially not if her boyfriend hated the guy. It just doesn't seem realistic, and I've seen stories using this formula over and over again.

Your writing style is good, just not the actual plot. And I really want to read a good story with good writing with a good plot, not another story with good writing using a cliche and boring plot. I don't know ... I think I might have been just mad that day, and I'm sorry for taking it out on you. But my stance still remains, is there any way you could still write this story while not making it so cliche and hard to believe?

Now this... this is interesting. ... I like. Heh.

Ooh i like. Great job can't wait for the rest...update soon!

Oh my goodness... This seems so good. But what the heck is she doing digging herself into more of a hole...? lol i hope you update soon!