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| Like a love sick puppy 2007-10-03 ch 1,  | abusehey good poem. |
| XxBlackChaosxX 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis one is okay, but not one of your best. Also, since this is the last one you have, I feel compelled to review for all the others here.(As I obviously will) Okay...Your poems are too short, to begin with. With what you're talking about, you need to ad more description and feeling to them. With what you have now, all I get is images. I don't get any FEELING of what you're saying. Get it? Otherwise, your poems are very wonderful and I'll put them into a c2 with mine. I like your poetry and can't wait to read more from you. Good luck ~Bianca Cerio |