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| empathic life 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseLovely piece. I liked the way you almost jumped right into the middle of the story, like your characters jumped right into the middle of a relationship. ^^ And the play on genders was marvelously wonderful, because I like to hope that some self-righteous homophobe was terribly offended by it, as I adore freaking people out just a bit. Anyway... Um... I'm not good at reviewing, but I felt it was worth it. I also just devoted my entire afternoon to reading Frosty Skies, and I most definitely commend you for it. I'm always on the look-out for well-written lesbian stories, and you very much so exceeded my expectations. Hope this review finds you well, and... That's all! -e.l. |
| RandoMaia 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseVery, very cute. Well done. I like your descriptions, and you do a good job of setting the mood, even if the story is told very matter-of-factly.I take issue with one or two word choices, and the dialogue could be a bit more natural than it is, but this is still a nice little piece. Congrats. |
| Munku-JGSPTV 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it ^_^ Description at the beginning is lovely, and I like the exchange of names at the end. |
| lonely 2007-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it. its cute |