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| squiggle-line 2007-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting format. I'm glad it's pretty readable. I have to agree with Operation Miranda though...where is this going? Heather's move seems to be important...but what is her relationship with the two friends? |
| Operation Miranda 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseUm, is this going anywhere? I love the idea of using IM for text (even though as you said, it has been done before) but I was disappointed. And I feel bad for Heather! Even if she's a **, there's something cruel about watching (or reading) two girls trash another girl. Very exciting use of language, though, I just wish there were a more exciting plotline, even this early in the story. |
| Mylinda Antoinette 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseVERY cute, my friend! I love it! Will this be multiple chapters? |