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Reviews For: Betrayal

Ramenluver
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseI didn't think it was confusing at all. Very well played out.
Keep writing, dear.

=Ramen
daisy dreams.
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abusedepressing... but very well-written
Anjel Kitty
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseLord, I know how that feels. One of my best friends in elemaentary betrayed me, and I left the school because of it. I later meet a friend who was one of the trio that her, the friend that bretrayed me, and I was, whe said that she was sorry about what had happened and that she wanted to be friends again. She also said that after I left her and the other girl stopped being frineds because of what the girl had done to me. I am now friends with the girl(not the one that betrayed me) and happy about it because I knew that it wasn't her fault that the girl did what she did. Love the poem.
CrystallineEyes
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseHey...

That's hurts.

>_<

I love your job.

So deep.

^^

Keep it up.
A Sweet Escape
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseIt's so deep and so intense, but in an AMAZING way! I love how you have the power to write like that!
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