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| Grace 2007-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseI feel as though Ryan and Bryan sound like girls. You shouldn't force them to become couples! its not nice! either way i hope that ryan and emma end up together their so cute! :D |
| Anonymous 2007-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood job. There are some few kinks here and there but u would eventually improve in your writing. Keep up your good work! |
| DramaQueenMaureen 2007-09-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseHeh, just coming back to re-read this...so excited for filming! I LOVE TRIANGLE! (and again, the love scene is adorable even if I'm in it) |
| PadfootDavis 2007-06-24 ch 8, | abuseWowzers, what an ending! Can you get the thrid one up soon? I really like this. |
| fuh-fwam dude 2007-06-06 ch 8, | abuseoh...my...god this was one of ur best! i laughed with ryan's thingy saying about not being an idiot. lol and i was shocked when adam liked steph... that's pretty fuuny and i would have never thought about that ever happening. and.. i was totally shocked when Emily shouted she was pregnant! OMG i def. wouldn't have guessed that! i think u should make a third one, u could make it based on the relationship between steph and adam. and the conflict of emily being pregnant! lol can't wait for hte third (if you write one lol) |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-06-06 ch 8, | abuseI love the Rent/Wicked crossover line And the dance contest And the singing of we didn't start the fire (love that song) This made me laugh a lot, MICKY! And right now it's taking a lot to make me laugh...sorry to be a downer...W/e loved this so much, w/a firey passion of 10 suns! |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-06-05 ch 8, | abuseAH!! OMG I HATE YOU!! I was just talking to my mom this morning about how in Darn triangle 2 I'm not a **!! arg! although the A/N was nice, so i knida dont hate u as much... LOL, I'LL MISS U GUYS 2! AH! OK, NOW BACK TO HATING U! NO! I AM NOT PRENANT! NO WAY!! ME AND ADAM, NO WAY! AT LEAST MAKE ME PREGNANT WITH SOME other GUY!! AH! OK! I AM DONE REVIEWING! AMAZING CHAPTER EXCEPT FOR THE END WHICH IS BAD! SOMETHING BAD IS HAPPENING IN DARN TRAINGLE!! SOMETHING BAD!! YES, I DO HAVE TO START SINGING! AH!! I HATE YOU!! JUST KIDING!!WE STILL NEED DIRECTORS YOU STILL NEED MONEY YOU KNOW YOU NEED MONEY DON'T BE AFRAID OF KERCHING KERCHING! ok, done singing now!! KEEP WRITING BUT NOT ABOUT ME BEING PREGNANT!! |
| kyung 2007-06-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseum, pretty good.. but uh... damn no come back... RYEMMA! XP |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-06-04 ch 7, | abuseAW RYEMMA! IT DOES ROLL OF THE TONGUE AW IM PICTURING RINA SITTING ALONE SINGING A MOMENT LIKE THIS, SHES SO CUTE, SO IS KYUNG, THATS Y THEY R 100 % PERFECT...Y DO I ALWAYS TYPE IN CAPS ON REVIEWS 4 THIS...W/E! WE'VE WAITED A LIFETIME 4 A MOMENT LIKE THIS I STILL THINK A MICKY SCENE SHOULD OCCUR, I CAN HELP U |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-06-03 ch 7, | abuseAH!! RIYUONG AND RYEMMA ARE SO CUTE!! omgomgomg!! I love the last little bit where we jump out of the bushes!! we WILL so do that WHEN it happens!! I also love Rina singing, that's soo cute!! and I love their ymmuy conversation!! i could totally see them having that reall conversation!! haahahahahahaha!!AH!! RYEMMA!! you are so cute!! escpecially in this scene!! I love Ryan saying cute!! Ryemma dvjk rolls off the tounge!! I love the shooting star thing!! so cute!! Only you and ryan together!! ah!! CUTE!! gay baby!! hahaha! CUTE!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! I AM HYPER RIGHT NOW AND PROCRASTINATING FROM HOME WORK SO THIS IS LIKE MY LONGEST REVIEW YET!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO CUTE! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITING! |
| DramaQueenMaureen 2007-06-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseAw! I'm IN it and I thought it was cute! Would our couple name be Stadam? Ew, horrible name. Oh well. Who's gonna play Brian and Vanessa when we film? |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-06-02 ch 6, | abuseAww im gonan miss triangle...unless there is a 3rd one, but i do think thats pushing it (i have other reasons y 2, but ill email them to you l8r) Gr8 chapter...write one more chap where Emma answers Ryans ? and he answer is YES! Thanks for breaking up Catricky...RIYUNG! |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-06-02 ch 6, | abuseomgomgomg! I LOVE IT! keep writing! you said there was another suprise...? a third would rock! love it! keep writing! |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-05-31 ch 5, | abuseLOVED! Five tips of being cool, Kyung being Glinda hehe, RYEMMA...srry...RIYUNG(BEST COUPLE EVER)! Mademily...we all know what I want...O WHY DID I SAY THAT, never mind, lalalala hehe, update soon |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-05-30 ch 5, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! as usual, so funny! I love Kyung singing popular and Ryemma are so cute!! (dont kill me!!) Brian reads Cosmo girl!! ha! I love his tips for being cool! And I would totally be the one who wants to film brian tipping over a table!! Which I will get to film!! over the summer! cause I'm not in that scene! yayayayay! I love the cute couples! hahahahahaha! And Steph and CC! yayayay! if it weren't for the "big suprise" (*wink*wink), they should totally get together!! (if steph or cc is reading this, dont kill me!!) This rocks, I love this! hahahahaha!! can't wait to film it over the summer! yayay!! first rehersal fri! yayay! fun! ok! I'm done! Bye! Keep Writing! |