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| jojoba-music-girl 2007-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the originality of the subject! Great! The only thing that I liked less was that you've put so little in the poem, only saying it with a lot of words. It's a bit of the same every line. But the ending was great again! Good job, overall! |
| Brat. 2007-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you so much Shrimp. |