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MockingBird Grrl 2007-09-09 . chapter 7
Just getting to the good stuff and you left your readers hanging. A little ritalin might go a long way to curb that ADD of yours.
That being said... and regardless of what prompted this particular story (=P), you did a really fabulous job at building on the mystery and incorporating past and present.
Plus... that Davis guy is HAWT.
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