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| LittleDoe 2007-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseTHIS is what I call a perfect story snippet. I like the story line and enjoyed reading it. Are you thinking of continuing this? Well Done! God Bless, LittleDoe |
| million colors lily 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abusewow,I really like this story can't wait to read more! |
| jennie marsland 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseLots of potential here. Perhaps a little more dialogue - Buck talking to himself, or his horse, or even the twins - would be good. Well done! I'll be looking for more. |