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| Keisha Orange 2007-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseMuy Bueno! |
| Genesis Rose 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAh, the Holocost... I see... Wow that was very morbid. Good writing. |
| Phish With Lemon 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. Very gory, but it obviously wouldn't be the same without some gore. If your English teacher didn't give you an A, their insane. If I wrote something like this, I'd definatly get sent to counseling... again. |
| The Jynx of Kari 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWho-oah! Freaky. Really. . .descriptive, realistic, heart-breaking. I'd totally do the same thing if I was stuck there. __Kari |
| WyrdWolf 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseVery creepy. o.O Defninitely hits a nerve inside that gives you the shivers. It was good for the story, but just so you don't get it wrong on a test or something, I'm fairly certain that they didn't kill people with the furnace--they killed them in gas chambers and whatnot and just burned the bodies in the crematorium. Good story. Wolfie |