Cool story. I like the plot.
Man, it would suck to be that young and have three kids already and an evil husband like that. Update soon!

TheRedBandit

Facinating! It is well written and I like the plot. The strange words and their meanings are nice too. They add a nice flavor to the story. I will keep an eye out for more of the story. Well Done!

Interesting. I do't like having to scroll down to find meanings, but I guess you have no choice. I will be reading on.

i like the way your write it, it's very well writen. and i also like the way the chaper concludes and proves it's point in the story.

Update