Aw... sad but sweet. I liked it... and do people really put black flags in their yards when their friend dies? Anyway, nice job.

It's good, written good too, but, (I hate buts too) it was kinda obvious after a bit that she was dead- sorta lessens the impact of sadness. Were u meant to make it lyk dat?

The signs are cliches and it was unnecessary for you to list them again at the end. Gee, sixth sense much?