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| Beluga1 2008-02-18 ch 1,  | abusewe have been in the same C2 for a while but i just recently looked at the other poems and i really like urs. no offense to anyone but i dont really like like poems that dont ryme and urs rymes beautifully! |
| Desiree32 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI like the gentle tone; the way the words flow reminds me somehow of the sun shining through leaves in a forest... don't know why! :P The rhythm was sometimes off, but I like the rhyme scheme and the short lines~ A great poem!! ^.^ |