I loved the rhyming scheme and message of this poem! God bless!

~midnightjoy

Amen! I really liked this. I've been through something very similar myself, and I really enjoyed the way you managed to put it into words. Great job.

Wow, I like this song! It reminds me a bit of my own experience with Jesus ^^ And I like the part "Good works are fruit, not the tree" - it does show very clearly how one can't be saved by works alone, but needs God to let them grow.

Oh I love this! So moving =] Singing to The Father =]

A beautiful song to our Savior! I wish I were a good musician, then I would put it to music! Until then, it is wonderful in poetry form also. Great job!