|Reviews for Under water|
| Toxik Purity 8/4/08 . chapter 1
Very nice. The poem's length (or lack of) contributes to the idea of 'short and sweet', or in this case, 'short and refreshing'. I really like the last two lines, they end the poem well.
| curiouzkatt 2/23/08 . chapter 1
short but effective. I like it. )
| Definition 6/23/07 . chapter 1
Very pretty - the last line is perfect. Once again, nice choice of words; your description is vivid and brilliant.
| RuathaWehrling 6/7/07 . chapter 1
A short poem, but a good one. I don't have any real comments to make, but nice work!
| Beloved Truth 5/10/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I am adding this to my C2!
| The Reverse Edge Blade 5/9/07 . chapter 1
I liked the rhyming in this poem! Also, the picture you gave me with the words you chose was really clear! I liked that it was so short and simple! Great job!
The Reverse Edge Blade