Ooh. . . Is this a 'found' poem, where you use different lines from different songs, or is it INSPIRED by different songs?

I like it a lot. I could pick out references from different songs. . . I think. I don't want to misinterpret anything.

But, it's good.

The use of the passage of time is excellent. I thought you would stop at 9:30, but 9:27? It made me smile.

Concerning your writing: 'carry on'.