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AK the Twilight 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseThe ending is a solid clincher and the rest of the poem is emotional, but you still need to catch those forced rhyming. Rhyme isn't the focus of poetry, although in your other works, you showed how well it can be. Also, the "rain fall, wind blow" feels a bit misplaced. You possess a knack for rhyming; it just takes some consideration where it goes. Enjoyable poem though, and good job.
Dani P 2007-05-09 ch 1,	abusei like this one mucho. specially the last line. bravo...-envy-