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| Katherine-the-greate 2007-07-15 ch 3, | abusePlease write more. You have a great story and we all want to read more!! Please update soon! =) |
| tlw1 2007-06-01 ch 3, | abuseLots of fun! I guess I like cheesy stories, as you called it, since I did like this! |
| Amber Richardson 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abuseHey, I really liked your story. The characters have been really well portrayed, right down to the swashbuckling language:D The only thing is that some spelling and names are mixed up and can confuse a reader at times. You haven't really described the setting, but I actually like that for this story. It leaves more for the reader to imagine for themselves, and there's really not all that many descriptive words for a wooden ship and water, lol. Overall I think it's a great story and has a lot of promise. I can't wait to read more. :D Happy writing. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI love your story! You really must write more... and very soon. I think you are a great writer! Please write more.=) |
| Initially loaded 2007-05-17 ch 3, | abusei like it...its going quite fast, but then i suppose you have a lot planned. |
| Stang65 2007-05-16 ch 3, | abuseNo breaks for you!! Get busy girl! Write that next chapter! This one, although really, really great, left me hanging on the edge of a cliff!! Wah! Seriously, you did a great job! Now get busy and write the next chapter... I really can't wait... BTW, very well written. I love Emmy! Her character is superb!! Not to mention the hot pirate that's tormenting her... Oh yeah! |
| Stang65 2007-05-15 ch 2, | abuseReally love this story! Please update soon!! |
| Stang65 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI never laughed so hard... This is a GREAT story! It's so cool! Please update soon! |
| Rashelyn 2007-05-15 ch 2, | abuseHi! This is a well-written story. I like how you portray your main character, Emmy and Daniel. They suit each other. There's this one detail that I think you have overlooked, though - regarding the name of Daniel's father in Chapter 1. In one paragraph, it was Edward. In another, it was Jamison. I just got confused there. Anyway, I still think you did a great job. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thumbs up! :) |
| J.E.Wyatt 2007-05-14 ch 2, | abuseHahaha!! I loved this part: "Whoever you are, I swear you will not get away with this! You bloody bastard!"... "Oh, Miss Roberts, I think we did get away with it!" ... It was just to funny. Anyways, make the chapters longer honey! hehe, and thank you very much for your reviewing my story. Much appreciated! And yah, when a historical romance writer suddenly decides to write a contemporary romance...well...it's true, you would be catching glimpses of the modern language mixing with the eighteenth century language, lol. It's like, "You're story, Pirate's Daughter, kicks **, indeed!" hehe Ah, enough of me. Take care, J.E.Wyatt |
| J.E.Wyatt 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAlthough you lacked description of scenery, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's always been enjoyable to read about pirates and stuff, it's all the rave...now that Pirates of the Carribean (however you spell this) is coming to theatres!! haha. Anyways, onto chapter two! |
| Mrs. Drama Lover 2007-05-14 ch 2, | abusewrite more please |
| canDii-aPpLe 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseit was realli good but u shuda written more about wat happened afterwards, but still very good =) |