Hey, great story. It was really entertaining and funny.. I love your style of writing too- it actually kept me reading beyond the first few paragraphs. Can't wait to hear more. I do agree though that the character's names are a little difficult. It didn't seem like it fits the personality of your characters, but other than that I give it two thumbs up!

Another great chapter :)
What I wonder is why their families kicked them out, and why no one there seemed to like them. I guess I'll have to wait.

H.

Okay, I'll tell you right now that I'm slightly in love with this story, mostly because of the writing. I'm very impressed with how you've portrayed the two characters' relationship, and the dialogue was pretty much perfect. It was a joy to read. But there was one thing (that seems to happen quite a lot on this site), and that's the names. I know, I sound like a snotty, pretentious bastard telling you to change the names of your own characters, but I'm telling you that as a reader, and an open-minded one at that, I found the characters' names difficult. Just in that they both seemed like last names, and I couldn't associate any gender with them. I kept getting them confused because I couldn't put a picture with each name; the name just didn't stick to the personality, if that makes any sense at all. But honestly, other than that, I'm definitely a fan. Will be reading the next chapter, and the ones after that. Happy writing,

H.

I really like it. Nice and long, funny, and with a ton of sarcasm. Absolutely great. Nice job and I'm hoping to see more.